HisMajestyfindingthismethodwouldnotdo,desiredtheportertotellhismasterthattheGoodmanofBallangeighdesiredtospeakwiththeKingofKippen。TheportertellingArnpryorsomuch,he,inallhumblemanner,cameandreceivedtheKing,andhavingentertainedhimwithmuchsumptuousnessandjollity,becamesoagreeabletoKingJames,thatheallowedhimtotakesomuchofanyprovisionhefoundcarryingthatroadashehadoccasionfor;andseeinghemadethefirstvisit,desiredArnpryorinafewdaystoreturnhimasecondtoStirling,whichheperformed,andcontinuedinverymuchfavorwiththeKing,alwaysthereafterbeingtermedKingofKippenwhilehelived。’
"ThereadersofAriostomustgivecreditfortheamiablefeatureswithwhichJamesisrepresented,sinceheisgenerallyconsideredastheprototypeofZerbino,themostinterestingherooftheOrlandoFurioso。"
743。Glidedfromherstay。TheMS。has"shrinking,quitsherstay。"
Ruskinasksusto"notethenorthernloveofrocks"inthispassage,andadds:"Dantecouldnothavethoughtofhis’cutrocks’asgivingresteventosnow。Hemustputitonthepinebranches,ifitistobeatpeace。"TaylorquotesHolmes,AutocratofBreakfastTable:"Shemeltedawayfromherseatlikeanimageofsnow。"
780。Pry。Lookpryinglyorcuriously。Inproseonwouldnotbeusedwithpry。
784。Tospeed。Toafortunateissue;unlessspeedbetheverb,and=pass。
786。Inlife’smorelowbuthappierway。TheMS。has"Inlowlylife’smorehappyway。"
789。ThenameofSnowdoun。Scottsays:"WilliamofWorcester,whowroteaboutthemiddleofthefifteenthcentury,callsStirlingCastleSnowdoun。SirDavidLindsaybestowsthesameepithetuponitinhisComplaintofthePapingo:
’Adieu,fairSnawdoun,withthytowershigh,Thychaple—
royal,park,andtableround;May,June,andJuly,wouldI
dwellinthee,WereIaman,tohearthebirdissound,Whilkdothaganethyroyalrockrebound。’
"Mr。Chalmers,inhislateexcellenteditionofSirDavidLindsay’sworks,hasrefutedthechimericalderivationofSnawdounfromsnedding,orcutting。ItwasprobablyderivedfromtheromanticlegendwhichconnectedStirlingwithKingArthur,towhichthementionoftheRoundTablegivescountenance。TheringwithinwhichjustswereformerlypractisedintheCastlepark,isstillcalledtheRoundTable。SnawdounistheofficialtitleofoneoftheScottishheralds,whoseepithetsseeminallcountriestohavebeenfantasticallyadoptedfromancienthistoryorromance。
"ItappearsfromtheprecedingnotethattherealnamebywhichJameswasactuallydistinguishedinhisprivateexcursionswastheGoodmanofBallenguich;derivedfromasteeppassleadinguptotheCastleofStirling,socalled。Buttheepithetwouldnothavesuitedpoetry,andwouldbesidesatonce,andprematurely,haveannouncedtheplottomanyofmycountrymen,amongwhomthetraditionalstoriesabovementionedarestillcurrent。"
798。Myspell—boundsteps。TheMS。has"ThysovereignbacktoBenvenue。"
Thysovereign’ssteps
800。Glaive。Sword。Seeoniv。274above。
803。Pledgeofmyfaith,etc。TheMS。has"PledgeofFitz—
James’sfaith,thering。"
808。Alightening。Someeds。have"Alightning。"
809。Andmore,etc。TheMS。reads:
"Andinherbreaststrovemaidenshame;
MoredeepshedeemedtheMonarch’sireKindled’gainsthim,who,forhersire,AgainsthisSovereignbroadsworddrew;
And,withapleading,warmandtrue,ShecravedthegraceofRoderickDhu。"
813。Grace。Pardon。
825。Stained。Reddened。
829。TheGraeme。Jeffreysays:"MalcolmGraemehastooinsignificantapartassignedhim,consideringthefavorinwhichheisheldbothbyEllenandtheauthor;andinbringingouttheshadedandimperfectcharacterofRoderickDhuasacontrasttothepurervirtueofhisrival,Mr。Scottseemstohavefallenintothecommonerrorofmakinghimmoreinterestingthanhimwhosevirtueshewasintendedtosetoff,andconvertedthevillainofthepieceinsomemeasureintoitshero。Amodernpoet,however,mayperhapsbepardonedforanerrorofwhichMiltonhimselfisthoughtnottohavekeptclear,andforwhichthereseemssonaturalacauseinthedifferencebetweenpoeticalandamiablecharacters。"
837。Warder。Guard,jailer。
841。LockhartquotesherethefollowingextractfromaletterofByron’stoScott,datedJuly6,1812:
"Andnow,waivingmyself,letmetalktoyouofthePrinceRegent。Heorderedmetobepresentedtohimataball;andaftersomesaying,peculiarlypleasingfromroyallips,astomyownattempts,hetalkedtomeofyouandyourimmoralities:hepreferredyoutoeverybardpastandpresent,andaskedwhichofyourworkspleasedmemost。Itwasadifficultquestion。I
answered,IthoughttheLay。Hesaidhisownopinionwasnearlysimilar。Inspeakingoftheothers,ItoldhimthatIthoughtyoumoreparticularlythepoetofprinces,astheyneverappearedmorefascinatingthaninMarmionandTheLadyoftheLake。Hewaspleasedtocoincide,andtodwellonthedescriptionofyourJames’sasnolessroyalthanpoetical。HespokealternatelyofHomerandyourself,andseemedwellacquaintedwithboth。"
842。HarpoftheNorth,farewell!Cf。theintroductiontothepoem。
846。Wizardelm。Seeoni。2above。
850。Housing。Returningtothehive。
858。Thegriefdevoured。Forthefigure,cf。Ps。xlii。3,lxxx。
5,andIsa。xxx。20。
859。O’erlive。Severaleds。misprint"o’erlived。"
Addendum。
SinceourfirsteditionappearedwehavehadtheprivilegeofexaminingacopyofScott’s2ded。(1810),belongingtoMr。E。S。
Gould,ofYonkers,N。Y。This2ded。isinsmallertypethanthe1st,andinoctavoform,the1stbeinginquarto。Aminutecollationofthetextwiththatofthe1sted。andourownshowsthatScottcarefullyrevisedthepoemforthis2ded。,andthatthechangesheafterwardsmadeinitwerefewandunimportant。
Forinstance,thetextincludestheverbalchangeswhichwehaveadoptedini。198,290,432,ii。103,201,203,534,iii。30,173,190,508,v。106,253,728,811,iv。6,112,527,556,567,etc。Invi。291fol。itreads(includingtheomissionsandinsertions)asinourtext。Ini。336,340,thepointingisthesameasinthe1sted。;andini。360,thereadingis"dear。"Inii。865,866,itvariesfromthepointingofthe1sted。;butweareinclinedtoregardthisasamisprint,notacorrection。Inii。76this2ded。has"lingerewave"for"lingererwave,"andinii。217itrepeatsthepreposterousmisprintof"hisglee"fromthe1sted。IfScottcouldoverlooksuchpalpableerrorsasthese,hemighteasilyfailtodetectthemisplacingofacomma。
Wehaveourdoubtsastoi。336,340,wherethe1stand2deds。
agree;butthereamisprintmayhavebeenleftuncorrected,asinii。217。
Jan。25,1884。
Footnotes:
[FN#1]OneofScott’s(onvi。47)hassufferedbadlyinLockhart’sedition。InaquotationfromLordBerners’sFroissart(whichIomit)awholepageseemstohavedroppedout,andthelastsentence,asitnowstands,ismadeupofpansoftheoneprecedingandtheonefollowingthelostmatter。Itreadsthus(I
markthegap):"Thereallthecompanyonsmadethem[……]
brekenopoyntofthatyehaveordaynedandcommanded。,’Thisispalpablenonsense,butithasbeenrepeatedwithoutcorrectionineveryreprintofLockhart’seditionforthelastfiftyyears。
[FN#2]Lockhartsays:"TheladywithwhomSirWalterScottheldthisconversationwas,nodoubt,hisaunt,MissChristianRutherford;therewasnootherfemalerelationDEADwhenthisIntroductionwaswritten,whomIcansupposehimtohaveconsultedonliteraryquestions。LadyCapulet,onseeingthecorpseofTybalt,exclaims,——
’Tybalt,mycousin!Omybrother’schild!’"
[FN#3]LockhartquotesByron,DonJuan,xi。55:
"Intwicefiveyearsthe’greatestlivingpoet,’
Liketothechampioninthefistyring,Iscalledontosupporthisclaim,orshowit,Although’tisanimaginarything,"etc。
[FN#4]"SirWalterreignedbeforeme,"etc。(DonJuan,xi。57)。
[FN#5]TheSpenserianstanza,firstusedbySpenserinhisFaerieQueene,consistsofeightlinesoftensyllables,followedbyalineoftwelvesyllables,theaccentsthroughoutbeingontheevensyllables(theso—callediambicmeasure)。Therearethreesetsofrhymes:oneforthefirstandthirdlines;anotherforthesecond,fourth,fifth,andseventh;andathirdforthesixth,eighth,andninth。
[FN#6]VideCertayneMattersconcerningtheRealmeofScotland,etc。,astheywereAnnoDomini1597。London,1603。
[FN#7]Seeonii。319above。
[FN#8]Hallowe’en。
[FN#9]Totheraventhatsatontheforkedtreehegavehisgifts。
[FN#10]"ThisstoryisstillcurrentinthemoorsofStaffordshire,andadaptedbythepeasantrytotheirownmeridian。Ihaverepeatedlyheardittold,exactlyashere,byrusticswhocouldnotread。MylastauthoritywasanailernearCheadle"(R。Jamieson)。
[FN#11]SeeScottishHistoricalandRomanticBallads,Glasgow,1808,vol。ii。p。117。
[FN#12]Achampionofpopularromance;seeEllis’sRomances,vol。iii。
[FN#13]"ThatattheeasternextremityofLochKatrine,sooftenmentionedinthetext。"
[FN#14]"Beallachanduine。"
[FN#15]"Thereaderwillfindthisstorytoldatgreaterlength,andwiththeadditioninparticularoftheKingbeingrecognized,liketheFitz—JamesoftheLadyoftheLake,bybeingtheonlypersoncovered,intheFirstSeriesofTalesofaGrandfather,vol。iii,p。37。TheheirofBraeheaddischargedhisdutyatthebanquetgiventoKingGeorgeIV。intheParliamentHouseatEdinburgh,in1822"(Lockhart)。
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